Observations from life
I wrote a little Haiku that is remininscent of this sentiment:Rain drops on dead leaves.The earth absorbs and recycles.Old flowers replaced.Let me know if you like it or if it is over the top.....
I do love it! Haiku poetry is wonderful and multi-layered. This is very literal and yet, it carries other sentiments behind the words. You did beautifully! Thank you!!
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I wrote a little Haiku that is remininscent of this sentiment:
Rain drops on dead leaves.
The earth absorbs and recycles.
Old flowers replaced.
Let me know if you like it or if it is over the top.....
I do love it! Haiku poetry is wonderful and multi-layered. This is very literal and yet, it carries other sentiments behind the words. You did beautifully! Thank you!!
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